BISCUITS
Sreekanta Panda
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Biscuits, is a part of living beings
It’s a pleasure of Imagination ,
It’s a symbol of sorrow one ;
It’s just a smile of crying baby
And above all
It is the backbone of
Dalit life in footpath.
Biscuits plays a pivotal role
to the sufferer one
during disaster mitigation,
It’s an essential note
for the hungry one,
And somextent it plays
a role in worldliness
just for a time pass.
so biscuits is the key note
and an integral part of involvement
of living beings.
Sreekanta Panda
The core of your writing while appearing reasonable originally, did not really work properly with me after some time. Someplace within the sentences you actually managed to make me a believer but just for a very short while. I nevertheless have got a problem with your jumps in logic and you would do well to fill in all those gaps. In the event that you actually can accomplish that, I would undoubtedly end up being fascinated.