#ପ୍ରେମର_ଅଫେରା_ବାଟ- #ଚକଡା଼ଏ_ଜୀଵନାନୁଭୂତି
#ଲେଖିକା- #ସୁନିତା_ସୋନି_ବାରିକ*
#ପ୍ରକାଶକ -:#ପଶ୍ଚିମା*
ସମୀକ୍ଷକ- ମନୋଜ କୁମାର ପଣ୍ଡା
ଅଧୁନା ଓଡ଼ିଆ ସହିତ୍ୟାକାଶରେ ଯେଉଁ କେତେଜଣ ପ୍ରିୟ ସାହିତ୍ୟିକା ଚକ୍ଷୁ ର ମୁଦ୍ରିତା ଅବସ୍ଥାରେ ସ୍ମରଣ କୁ ଆସନ୍ତି ସେମାନଙ୍କ ମଧ୍ୟରୁ ସୁନିତା ସୋନି ବାରିକ ଆଦରର ସୋନି ଦିଦି ସ୍ୱତଃ ଭାସି ଆସନ୍ତି ମାନସ ପଟକୁ ବାରମ୍ବାର।
ଅନେକ ଗଳ୍ପ/କବିତା ସର୍ଜନାକର୍ମରେ ଅହରହ ସୃଜନ ମନସ୍କ ହେଉଥାଏ ତାଙ୍କ ମନ ଆଉ ହୃଦୟ। ତାଙ୍କର ସଦ୍ୟ ପ୍ରକାଶିତ ଅନନ୍ୟ କାବ୍ୟ କୋଣାର୍କ ‘ପ୍ରେମ ର ଅଫେରା ବାଟ’ ମୋର ହସ୍ତ ଗତ ହୋଇଥିଲା ଠିକ ‘ୟସ’ ଆସିବା ପୂର୍ବରୁ। ବାତ୍ୟା ପ୍ରଭାବ ରୁ ତିନିଦିନ ଧରି ବିଦ୍ୟୁତ ସରବରାହ ବନ୍ଦ ରହିଲା ଆଉ ମୁଁ ପଢିବା କୁ ଲାଗିଲି ତାଙ୍କର ପୁସ୍ତକ କୁ। ଥରେ ନୁହେଁ ତିନିଥର ଏହି ବହିଟିକୁ ପଢିଥିଲେ ସୁଦ୍ଧା ସମୟ ର ଘୋର ଅଭାବ ଯୋଗୁଁ ସାନ ଭାଇ ବହି ସମ୍ପର୍କରେ କିଛି ମତାମତ ଦେଇ ପାରି ନଥିଲା ସେଥିପାଇଁ ପ୍ରଥମେ ତାଙ୍କ ଠାରୁ କ୍ଷମା ମାଗି ନେବାକୁ ଉଚିତ ମନେ କରୁଛି।
ତାଙ୍କର ଏହି ପୁସ୍ତକ ରେ ଥିବା ୫୦ ଗୋଟି କବିତା ଅତ୍ୟନ୍ତ ମନ ମୁଗ୍ଧକର। ଆଉ ପ୍ରତ୍ୟେକ ଟି ସୃଷ୍ଟି ସବୁ ଅସମ୍ଭବ କୁ ସମ୍ଭବ କରି ପାଠକ ଙ୍କ ହୃଦୟ ବଖରାରେ ଆବୋରି ବସେ ସ୍ୱତନ୍ତ୍ର ସ୍ଥାନ। ଆଜି ମୁଁ ତାଙ୍କ ପୁସ୍ତକ “ପ୍ରେମର ଅଫେରା ବାଟ” ସମ୍ପର୍କରେ କିଛି ଲେଖିବା ପାଇଁ ଯାଉଛି ଏକଥା ଭାବିଲା ବେଳକୁ ଛାତି ଦୁଇ ଇଞ୍ଚ ଅଧିକ ପ୍ରଶସ୍ଥ ଲାଗୁଛି। ମୁଁ ସତରେ କେତେ ବିଭୋର ହୋଇଛି ସେ କଥା କୁ ବଖାଣିବାକୁ ମୋ ପାଖରେ ଶବ୍ଦ ନାହିଁ।
ତାଙ୍କର ପୁସ୍ତକ ରେ ଦୁଇ ପ୍ରେମାତ୍ମା ଏକାଠି ଭେଟ ହୋଇଯାଇଛନ୍ତି ଆଉ ଆଖିରେ ଆଖି ମିଶାଇ ପରସ୍ପର କୁ ପଚାରୁଛନ୍ତି ଆଛା ଏ ପ୍ରେମର ସଂଜ୍ଞା କଣ , ଚାଲୁନ ଆମେ ଟିକିଏ ପ୍ରେମ କରିବା ନିରୋଳା ରେ । ଏକଥା ଶୁଣି ଅନ୍ୟଜଣେ ଟିକିଏ ଲାଜେଇ ଯାଇଛି ଆଉ କହୁଛି ଆମେ ପ୍ରେମ କରିବାକୁ କେଉଁଠି କୁ ଯିବା ଯେ। ୟା କଥା ନ ସରୁଣୁ ଅନ୍ୟ ଜଣେ ପୁଣି କହୁଛି ଚାଲୁନ ନଈ କୁଳ ଝାଉଁବଣ କୁ ଯିବା ନହେଲେ ହାତରେ ହାତ ଛନ୍ଦି ସମୁଦ୍ର ଆଡୁ ବୁଲି ଆସିବା।। ଧେତ୍ ଏସବୁ ପୁରୁଣା ହେଲାଣି ପା କିଛି ୟୁନିକ ଚିନ୍ତା କରୁନ ଯେଉଁଠାରେ ଅବିଶ୍ୱାସ ଆଉ ଛଳନା ର ବେକ ଚିପି କବର ଦିଆଯାଇଥିବ। ତାହେଲେ ଚାଲ ନା ଆମେ ଗୋଟିଏ କପ ଚା କୁ ଅଧା ଅଧା ଫୁଙ୍କି ଫୁଙ୍କି ପିଇବା ଆଉ କଙ୍କି ଧରି ସମୟ କାଟିବା। ବୁଲୁବୁଲୁ ଆଖିରେ ପଡୁଥିବା ପଶୁ ପକ୍ଷୀଙ୍କ ସହ ସାଙ୍ଗ ହେବା ଆଉ ଥକି ପଡ଼ିଲେ ବରଗଛ ତଳେ ବସି ପରସ୍ପର ର ମୁହଁ ପୋଛା ପୋଛି ହେବା । ଅଦିନିଆ ବର୍ଷା ଟା ବର୍ଷିଗଲେ ଉଭୟେ ମିଶି ଭିଜିବା ଆଉ ଲୁଚି ଲୁଚି ପୁଣି ପ୍ରେମ କରିବା।
ଏହି ପରି ଦୁଇ ପ୍ରେମାତ୍ମା ପ୍ରେମ ରେ ମସଗୁଲ ହୋଇଯାଇଛନ୍ତି ଆଉ ଦୂର ଦିଗନ୍ତକୁ ଆଖିରେ ଢ଼ୋକ ଢ଼ୋକ ପିଇ ସାଲୁବାଲୁ ଅନ୍ଧାର ଭିତରେ ପ୍ରେମାଳାପ କରୁ କରୁ କେତେବେଳେ ଯେ ଯାଇ ପ୍ରେମର ରାସ୍ତାରେ ପାଦ ଥାପିଛନ୍ତି ସେକଥା ଜାଣିପାରି ନାହାନ୍ତି। ଓଃ ଇଏ କଣ ବିଚ୍ଛେଦ ଧସେଇ କି ପଶି ଆସିଲା ଆଉ ଜଣେ ପ୍ରତୀକ୍ଷା କରି ରହିଛି ଆର ଜଣକୁ ଆଉ କହି ଚାଲିଛି
ତୁ ଆଉ ଫେରିବୁନି ଜାଣେ
ତଥାପି ତୋ ଫେରିବା ବାଟକୁ
ଚାହିଁଚି ଆଉ ଚାହିଁ ରହିଥିବି
ଜୁଇରେ ଶୋଇବା ଯାଏଁ,
କିଏ ଜାଣେ
କେତେବେଳେ ଲେଉଟି ଆସିବୁ ତୁ
ଅବା ତୋ ଛାଇ…..! (ପ୍ରେମର ରାସ୍ତାରେ- ୦୧)
ତାପରେ ପ୍ରଥମ ପ୍ରେମାତ୍ମା ଦ୍ୱିତୀୟ ପ୍ରେମାତ୍ମା ର ସେହି ବାତ୍ସଲ୍ୟ ବୋଳା ମଧୁର ସ୍ମୃତିକୁ ମନେ ପକାଇ ଭାଳି ହେଉଛି ଆଉ କହୁଛି
ପ୍ରେମ ର ଅଙ୍କା ବଙ୍କା ରାସ୍ତାରେ
ମୁଁ ଝୁଣ୍ଟୁଥାଏ ଯେତେ ଥର
ତଳେ ପଡିବା ଆଗରୁ
ମୋ ହାତ ଧରି ଉଠେଇଆଣୁ
ଥରକୁ ଥର।।(ପ୍ରେମର ରାସ୍ତାରେ- ୦୨)
ଏତାଦୃଶ ପବିତ୍ର ସ୍ୱଚ୍ଛ ପ୍ରେମ ର ପ୍ରତୀକ୍ଷା କୁ ଦେଖି ଆକାଶର ପ୍ରିୟ ଜହ୍ନ ମନରେ ଦୟା ଆସିଯାଇଛି ଆଉ ଟିକିଏ ସ୍ନେହ ଅଜାଡି ଆକାଶରୁ ଫେରାର ହୋଇଯାଏ
ଆସିବାର କଥା ଦେଇ
ଆସନ୍ତିନି ପ୍ରିୟ
ଜହ୍ନ ମୋତେ ଦେଖି
ଦୟା ପରଶେ ଅବା ଅନୁରାଗ
ମୁଁ ବୁଝିବା ଆଗରୁ
ସେ ଆକାଶ ରୁ ଫେରାର।(ପ୍ରେମର ରାସ୍ତାରେ- ୦୩)
ତାପରେ ଜଣେ ଆଉ ଜଣଙ୍କ ବିରହରେ ବାହୁନି କହୁଛି ଯେତେ କଷ୍ଟ ହେଲେ ସୁଦ୍ଧା ଇଚ୍ଛା ଟିଏ ଉଙ୍କି ମାରୁଥାଏ କେଉଁଠି ନା କେଉଁଠି ପୁରା କରିବାକୁ ଅଧୁରା ପ୍ରେମ।।
ପ୍ରେମିକ ବିନା ପ୍ରେମିକା
ଜ୍ୟୋତ୍ସ୍ନା ବିନା ଆକାଶ
ପ୍ରିୟ ବିନା ପ୍ରିୟା
ଆଉ ତୁମ ବିନା ମୁଁ
ଆନ ବିନା ଆରେକ
ସଭିଏଁ ତ ଅସମ୍ପୂର୍ଣ୍ଣ।
ତଥାପି ଇଚ୍ଛା ଟିଏ
କେଉଁଠି ନା କେଉଁଠି
ଉଙ୍କି ମାରୁଥାଏ ପୁରା କରିବାକୁ
ଅଧୁରା ପ୍ରେମ। (ପ୍ରେମର ରାସ୍ତାରେ- ୦୩)
ସବୁବେଳେ ପ୍ରେମ-ପ୍ରଣୟ ଆଉ ପ୍ରୀତିର ବ୍ୟାପକ ଅନ୍ତରୀକ୍ଷ ବହୁତ ନିଆରା ନିଆରା ଲାଗେ। ସତରେ ବଡ଼ ବିଚିତ୍ର ଏଇ ପ୍ରେମର ଶାଶ୍ୱତ ସଂଜ୍ଞା । ଏ ପ୍ରେମ ଏମିତି କା ଜିନିଷ ଯାହା ନିଜେ ହାରି ଅନ୍ୟକୁ ଜିତାଇ ମହାର୍ଘ୍ୟ ଅନୁଭବ ଆଉ ଅନୁଭୂତିରୁ ସାଉଁଟା ଯାଇପାରେ ଜୀଵନ ଜୀଇଁବାର ସଂଜ୍ଞା । ମାଟିର ଫଟା ଆଁ ରୁ ବ୍ୟାପକ ଆକାଶର ମଥାନ ପ୍ରତ୍ୟେକଟି ସୋପାନରେ ଏହାକୁ ଅନୁଭବ କରାଯାଇପାରେ । ପ୍ରେମର ଅଫେରା ବାଟରେ ଥରେ ପାଦ ପଡିଗଲେ ଆଉ ଫେରିବା ସହଜ ହୁଏନି । ପ୍ରେମ କରିବାଟା ଏତେବଡ ଅପରାଧ ନୁହେଁ, ହେଲେ ତାହା ଯଦି ଗ୍ରହଣୀୟ ନ ହୁଏ ପ୍ରେମ ପାଲଟିଯାଏ ଅସରାଏ ଲୁହ ଆଉ କଳାପାଣି ର ଛାତିଫଟା କୋହ ।
ଏମିତି ଏକ ମୌସୁମୀ ରେ
ଆମର ପ୍ରଥମ ଦେଖା ଚାହାଁ
ବନ୍ଧୁତା ରୁ ପ୍ରେମ
ଆଉ ପ୍ରେମ ରୁ ବିବାହ ପାଇଁ
ସ୍ବପ୍ନ ଦେଖିଥିଲୁ ଦୁହେଁ
ପୁଣି ଏକ ଅଦିନିଆ ମୌସୁମୀ ର
ଅନଧିକାର ହସ୍ତକ୍ଷେପ ରେ
ଭାସିଗଲା ସ୍ବପ୍ନ
ଚୁରମାର୍ ହୋଇଗଲା ଅଧାଗଢା ଘର,।
(ମୌସୁମୀ ର ନା ଦୁଃଖ)
ନିରବଚ୍ଛିନ୍ନ ନିରନ୍ତର ଭାବେ ଭଲ ପାଇବାକୁ ପ୍ରେମ କହନ୍ତି ଯାହା ତାଙ୍କ କବିତା ରୁ ବେଶ ଅନୁମେୟ । ଭଲ ପାଇବା ଭିତରେ ସନ୍ଦେହ,ଅବିଶ୍ବାସ,ମନାନ୍ତର ଓ ମତାନ୍ତର ରହେ, ରହିବା ସ୍ୱାଭାବିକ ଆଉ ପ୍ରତିଶୃତି ଦ୍ଵାରା ସବୁ ଭରସା ଆଉ ବିଶ୍ୱାସ କୁ ଆପଣାର କରି ଜିତିହୁଏ।
ଋତୁଚକ୍ର ରେ ଆଷାଢ଼ ଆସିଛି ଆଉ ଫୁଲେଇ ପ୍ରେମିକା ର ଆତ୍ମା ମନ ମାରି ବସିଛି ଆଉ ଗୁମାନ ରେ କହୁଛି
ଏବେ ପୁଣି ଆଷାଢ଼ ଫେରିଛି
ନୂଆ ରାଗିଣୀ କୁ ସାଙ୍ଗରେ ନେଇ
ହେଲେ ଏ ଆଷାଢ଼ ର ପହିଲି ବର୍ଷା ରେ
ଭିଜିବାକୁ
କେବେ ତମେ ନାହଁ,
କେବେ ମୁଁ ନାହିଁ।। (ପ୍ରତିଶ୍ରୁତି)
ତଥାପି ଶେଷ ପର୍ଯ୍ୟାୟରେ ପ୍ରେମର ଅଫେରା ପଥରେ ଗୋଡ଼ ଭାଙ୍ଗି ଆଣ୍ଠୋଇବା ହିଁ ସାର ହୁଏ । ପ୍ରେମର ସେହି ଜୁଆରିଆ ଖରସ୍ରୋତା ନଦୀରେ ଯିଏ ଉବୁଟୁବୁ ହେଇନି , ଯିଏ ପ୍ରତାରଣାର ବହ୍ନିରେ କଙ୍କି ହୋଇ ଜଳି ନାହିଁ ସେ କି ପ୍ରେମ ବା . ! ସାରା ଜୀବନ ପ୍ରତାରଣାରେ ସନ୍ତୁଳି ହେଲେ ବି ନିଜର ପ୍ରେମର ଦୀପାଳିକୁ କେବେ ନିର୍ବାପିତ ହେବାକୁ ଦେଇନାହିଁ । ବରଂ ପ୍ରତାରଣାକୁ ଭୁଲିଯିବା ପାଇଁ ଜୀବନକୁ ଏକ ଭିନ୍ନ ଧରଣର ପ୍ରଜ୍ଞା ରେ ଗଢି ତୋଳି ପ୍ରେମରେ ଅଧିକ ବାସ୍ନାୟିତ କରିବାକୁ ଶତଚେଷ୍ଟା କରିଛନ୍ତି । ପ୍ରେମିକକୁ ଅଭିଶାପ ନଦେଇ, ବରଂ ପଚାରି ବୁଝୁଛନ୍ତି ତାଙ୍କ ସ୍ବପ୍ନ ନାୟକ କୁ
ଥରୁଟିଏ ହେଉ ପଛେ ଏକାନ୍ତ ରେ ବସି
କେବେ ଲେଉଟାଇ ଦେଖ
ତୁମ ଇତିହାସ ର ଫର୍ଦ୍ଦ
ସେବେ କଣ ତୁମେ ଏମିତି ଥିଲ?
ନା ଚାକ ଚକ୍ୟତା ର ଆଳରେ
ଏବେ ବଦଳି ଯାଇଛ….। (ସ୍ବପ୍ନ ନାୟକ)
ପ୍ରେମିକା ରୁ ପତ୍ନୀ ହୋଇଥିବା ଜୀଵନ ସାଥିର ଏତାଦୃଶ ବିଳାପ ଶୁଣି ପ୍ରେମିକ ର ମଜବୁତ ହୃଦୟ କାନ୍ଦି ଉଠିଛି ରାତିର ଦ୍ୱିତୀୟ ପ୍ରହରରେ ଭୋକିଲା ପେଟରେ
ମଜବୁତ ହୃଦୟ ଟେ କାନ୍ଦୁଥିଲା
ରାତିର ଦ୍ୱିତୀୟ ପ୍ରହରରେ
ପାଖ ଛିଣ୍ଡାକନ୍ଥାରେ ଗଭୀର ନିଦରେ
ସ୍ତ୍ରୀ, ପୁଅ, ଝିଅ
କାଲି ରାତିର ଭୋକିଲା ପେଟରେ,।।
ଅମାନିଆ ହୋଇ ପ୍ରେମର ଅଫେରା ପଦରେ ପାଦ ଥାପି ସେହି ଅସହାୟ ପ୍ରେମିକ ର ପ୍ରେମିକା କୁ କେତେ ଲୋକ କେତେ କଥା କହି ଗଞ୍ଜଣା ଦେଇଛନ୍ତି ଏହାକୁ ସହି ନପାରି ପ୍ରେମିକ ଟି ଭିତରେ ଭିତରେ ଭାଙ୍ଗି ପଡୁଥାଏ ବାରମ୍ବାର।।
କଣ କରି ପାରିବ ସେ
ଏବେ ମୂଲକୁ ମିଳେ ମାତ୍ର ଦୁଇଶହ
ସେଥିରେ ପୁଣି ଶହ ଶହ କରଜ
ଅଧା ରାସ୍ତାରୁ ଛଡାଇ ନିଏ
ଦିନ ଜାକର ଆହାର ..
ଯେଉଁ ବଡ଼ପଣରେ
ପ୍ରେମ ର ହାତ ଧରି ଗୋଡ଼ କାଢ଼ିଥିଲା ଘରୁ
ସେବେଠୁ ଏକ ନୀରବ ଆମନ୍ତ୍ରଣ ମରଣର।
କେଜାଣି କେହିଜଣେ କହୁଥିଲା ତାତ୍ସଲ୍ୟ ରେ
ତୋ କର୍ମଫଳ ଇଏ
ଆଉ ଜଣେ ଛିଗୁଲେଇ ଆଖି ଠାରୁଥିଲା
ତା ନ ପୋଷି ପାରିବାର ଅସମର୍ଥତା ରେ,
ସେ ଭାଙ୍ଗୁଥିଲା ଭିତରେ ଭିତରେ
ଛଡେଇ ଆଣିବାକୁ ଚାହୁଁଥିଲା
ପୁତ୍ର ପଣର ଅଧିକାରରେ
ତା ଭାଗ୍ୟ ଭବିଷ୍ୟତ କୁ
ମଜବୁତ ହୃଦୟ ତରଳୁଥିଲା
ଅନ୍ଧାରର ଅନ୍ଧ ଗଳିରେ
ପ୍ରେମର ତାରୁଣ୍ୟତାରେ
ଅଗ୍ନି ପରୀକ୍ଷା ଦେଉଥିଲା
ଜୀଵନ କଷଟି ପଥରରେ। (ଏକ ନିରବ କାନ୍ଦଣା)
ଏତେ ଦୁଃଖ କଷ୍ଟ ରେ ଅଭାବୀ ଜୀଵନ କାଟୁଥିଲେ ସୁଦ୍ଧା ସେମାନଙ୍କ ଚଳ ଚଞ୍ଚଳ ଆଖି ହଳକ ଖୋଜି ବୁଲୁଛନ୍ତି ଏକ ଆଶ୍ୱସ୍ତି ର ସ୍ଥାନ
ପଚାରନା ମୋତେ
ଏ ଘଡିସନ୍ଧି ମୁହୂର୍ତ୍ତରେ
କେମିତି କଟୁଛି
ସବୁ ଦିନ ଅବା ରାତି ,
ଚଳ ଚଞ୍ଚଳ ଆଖି ହଳକ
ଏବେ ନିରାବତାର ଆସ୍ତରଣ ତଳେ
ଖୋଜିବୁଲୁଛି ଏକ ଆଶ୍ୱସ୍ତି ର ସ୍ଥାନ
ଯେଉଁଠି ସେ ବୁଣିପାରିବ
ତା ସ୍ବପ୍ନର ମହକ,
ହେଲେ ହଜିଛି ଠିକଣା
ପଥ ହୁଡି ବାଟ ବଣା ଏବେ
ନିରୀହ ପଥିକ। (ଆଞ୍ଜୁଳାଏ ସ୍ବପ୍ନ)
ଶେଷରେ ଚୁପଚାପ ଛିଣ୍ଡା କନ୍ଥା ତଳେ ପାରା ପରି ଲୁଚି ଲୁଚି ଗୁମୁରି କାନ୍ଦୁଥିବା ପ୍ରେମିକ ଟି କହୁଛି
ଆଜିବି ହୃଦୟ ର ନିଭୃତ କୋଣ ରେ
ତୁମର ସ୍ମୃତି ସବୁ ଆବୋରି ବସିଛି
ନା ସେ ମୋତେ ଛାଡ଼ି ଯାଉଛି
ନା ମୁଁ ତାକୁ ମୋ ଠୁ ଯିବାକୁ ଦେଇଛି
ପ୍ରତାରଣା କି ଛଳନାର ଦାଗ ସୁଦ୍ଧା
ତୁମକୁ ସ୍ପର୍ଶ ନ କରୁ ବୋଲି
ଆଜି ଦୁନିଆ ଦାଣ୍ଡରେ ଜଣେ
ପ୍ରତାରକ ବୋଲି କେତେ ଯେ
ଥୁ ଥୁ କେତେ ଧିକ୍କାର ନ ଶୁଣିଛି,
ଥରୁଟିଏ ହେଲେ
ତୁମ ଅନ୍ତଃମନ କଣ ବାଧା ଦେଇନି
ପ୍ରେମ ତ ଦୁହେଁ କରିଥିଲେ
ହେଲେ ମୋ ଭାଗରେ ସବୁ
ପ୍ରତାରଣା ଢାଳି ଦେଇ
ତୁମେ ସାଜିଗଲ ନିରୋଳା ପ୍ରେମିକା
ସେଥିକି ମୋର ଦୁଃଖ ନାହିଁ
ସବୁ ପ୍ରେମ ଯେ ଏକ ନିର୍ଦ୍ଦିଷ୍ଟ
ପରିଚୟ ବହନ କରିବ
ତାର କିଛି ମାନେ ନାହିଁ,
ମୁଁ ଏଇଥିରେ ହିଁ ଖୁସି ହୋଇ
ବାକି ଜୀଵନ ଜିଇଁ ଯିବି
ପ୍ରତାରକ ର ମୁଖା ପିନ୍ଧି
ସବୁ ଅପବାଦ ର
ବୋଝକୁ ମୁଣ୍ଡ ରେ ମୁଣ୍ଡେଇ ଚାଲିବି
କେବଳ ତୁମ ପାଇଁ….. (ଏମିତି ବି ପ୍ରେମ)
ପୁଣି ପ୍ରେମିକ ଜଣକ ମିଠା ଭାଷାରେ ପ୍ରେମିକା କୁ କହୁଛି
ଆଗ ଭଳି ତୋର ସେ ଭଲ ପାଇବା
କାହିଁ କେଉଁ କାଳୁ ଉଭାନ
କେବଳ ଏତିକି କହୁଛୁ ମୋ ଠାରୁ ଦୂରେଇ ରୁହ
ହେଲେ କାହିଁକି !
ତୋର ଏ ନୀରବତା
ଭିତରେ ଭିତରେ ଅଣନିଶ୍ୱାସୀ
କରି ଚାଲିଛି ମୋତେ
ମୁଁ ଖୋଜି ଚାଲିଛି ତୋ
ପରିବର୍ତ୍ତନ ପଛର କାହାଣୀ,
ଯେ ପର୍ଯ୍ୟନ୍ତ ପ୍ରଶ୍ନର ଉତ୍ତର
ପ୍ରାପ୍ତ ନ ହୋଇଛି
ସେ ଯାଏ ଜାରି ରହିବ ଏ ଅନ୍ୱେଷଣ
ହଁ ମନେ ରଖ ଏକା ତୁ ହୃଦୟ ଦେଇ
ଭଲ ପାଇବା ଶିଖିନୁ
ଏଥର ଦେଖ ମୋ ଭଲପାଇବା ର
ସବୁ ସୀମା ଲଙ୍ଘିଯିବି,
ପ୍ରେମ ର ଅଗ୍ନି ପରୀକ୍ଷା ରେ
ଦାଉ ଦାଉ ଜଳୁଥିବା
ଲେଲିହାନ ଶିଖା ଭିତରୁ
ପ୍ରେମ ରୂପକ ଉଜ୍ଜ୍ୱଳ ଚିକ୍ ମିକ୍ ହୀରା
ପୁଣି ଲେଉଟିବ ଉତ୍ତୀର୍ଣ୍ଣ ହୋଇ……! (ରୂପାନ୍ତରିତ)
ଶେଷରେ ପ୍ରେମିକା ଜଣକ ଅଭିମାନ ଛଳରେ ପ୍ରେମିକ କୁ ପଚାରିଛି
ତୁମେ କୁହ
ମୁଁ କାଳେ ଫୁଲେଇ
କେବେ ପୁଣି ମନୋଇ
ବେଳେ ବେଳେ ଅବୁଝା ଶ୍ରାବଣୀ
ପୁଣି କେବେ କୂଳ ଲଙ୍ଘି ଲହରୀ
କୁହ ତ
ଏତେ ସବୁ ବଦଗୁଣ ସତ୍ତ୍ୱେ
ତୁମେ ଦାବିକର
ଜୀବନଠୁ ଅଧିକ ପ୍ରେମ କର ବୋଲି
ସତରେ ଏମିତି ଝିଅକୁ
କଣ କରି ହୁଏ ପ୍ରେମ !
ଲେଖିକାଙ୍କ କଲମରେ -“ମିଛ ପ୍ରେମ ସବୁବେଳେ ଚମ୍ପିୟାନ ହେଉଥିବା ବେଳେ, ସଚ୍ଚା ପ୍ରେମ ସର୍ବଦା ବ୍ୟସ୍ତ ବାୟା ସଂଘର୍ଷ ଆଉ ଛଡାଝଂଜା ଦାବାନଳ ରେ ସିଝି ସିଝି ଶେଷ ହୋଇଯାଏ ଆଉ ଏ ପ୍ରେମ ଅମରତ୍ୱ ଲାଭ କରେ । ଏହା ହିଁ ମୁଖ୍ୟ ଦୃଷ୍ଟି ଭଙ୍ଗୀ ତାଙ୍କ କାବ୍ୟ ସଂକଳନ ର ।
ପୁସ୍ତକ ସମ୍ପର୍କରେ କଣ କିପରି ଲେଖାଯାଏ ଆଉ କେମିତି ସମୀକ୍ଷା କରାଯାଏ ଜାଣିନି । ଏଇଟି ମୋର ପଞ୍ଚମ ପୁସ୍ତକ ସମୀକ୍ଷା , ଯଦି କିଛି ଭୁଲ ଥାଏ ମୋତେ ଜଣାଇବେ ମୁଁ ପରବର୍ତ୍ତୀ ମୁହୂର୍ତ୍ତରେ ପୁସ୍ତକ ସମୀକ୍ଷା କଲେ ସେସବୁ ବିଷୟ ପ୍ରତି ଧ୍ୟାନ ଦେବି।
ପାଠକୀୟ ମତାମତ
*ମନୋଜ କୁମାର ପଣ୍ଡା*
*ପ୍ରତିଷ୍ଠାତା ଏବଂ ମୁଖ୍ୟ ସଚିବ ସୂର୍ଯ୍ୟୋଦୟ ଭାଷା ସାହିତ୍ୟ ପ୍ରତିଷ୍ଠାନ*
*ଅଡା, ବାଲେଶ୍ଵର*
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